Roma

Photography \ Figure | 04/07/08 @348 | blackshad | critiques (8) | views (392)

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hello gfx
result of my last model session
it's quite simple, but i like it

tell me what you think

im going to try and do more personnal or conceptual pictures soon, now that i got the basics right...

thx to Patrick - Moser for advices

model : Roma

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oldskool87

04/07/08 @399

nice... dont like the way she looks at the camera... would have liked a more natural look

KariceWest

04/07/08 @454

needs some work imo

Vasco

04/07/08 @599

Agree with the first comment. The look doesn't look natural. The black BG mingles with her hair... sorry this one isn't quite all that it could be... IMHO.

ersen-t

04/07/08 @695

good shot.
a little more space above would be nice.

purplerose

04/07/08 @746

I'm not sure what to think when I see this. It just looks like a snapshot of a friend with the background edited to make it one color.

It could be sharper.

contrast could be better because the lighting here is too harsh.

Not a very flattering portrait. Could be way better.

moserArtist

04/07/08 @858

This was not my favorites of those you showed me, remember!

I think this has a to much of "common" look written all over it. You need to work the model a bit with her pose and attitude.

Technically the eyes could be sharper and the white of the eyes looks surgically clean.

Keep experimenting!

androx3k

04/09/08 @968

some sharpness missing and i thing also something strange in the right edge of the face.
I like the model... she is so... oriental

MsMichelleLynn

04/09/08 @395

Very nice. She has a beautiful smile. Her eyes seem a bit blurred though ... possibly from some Photoshopping?

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