OK. here goes
We have a phrase here in Ireland
"Is trian de'n Obair, Tus achur"
"Making a beginning is a third of the work"

so having this girl pose was one third of the work,
another third for the shoot,
and finally a 3rd for the post processing..........

She is beautiful, you overdone the whitening of the eyes, this is simply to correct..
the colours look a little strange, I cant put my finger on it but there seems to be a strange case..

The only flaw i see is in the chin area. A slight use of the clone or heal tool should work a wonder.

Well done............

partially intentional but you never know what you will get
unless you have a real studio and you can control every parameter
wich was not the case here

i edited the picture after AH comments

Good to see you explore the women!

Suggestions:

• Different crop
• More color from the eyes
• Darker background
• Smoother skin

I really like the light on her hair!

Very nice portrait!...great mood!
Carlos

Nice model. Patrick has some good suggestions for you, especially about the skin. Just dont go this far Fragile by  moserArtist

i don't want to touch the skin, i think the texture adds to the picture this time

Wonderful photo! I agree with you, her skin is one of the best parts. She looks absolutely beautiful, and natural.
I like the full version better, but the colors in this is magnificent. A really great photo blackshad!

Nice portrait Jeremy

Beautiful portrait, dudeman!
Great capture, as usual!

Great texture!
I much prefer seeing that detail in a portrait. Crop looks perfect to me.

Looks great to me.
Good work Jeremy.

Great photo man , like the mood

Nice shot, i like the texture of the skin and the details on the hair; the eyes are over whitened and don´t really like the black clothes with tuttle neck (don´t know how you call that).
Nice lighting; should play abit more with the crop....!!!
Agree about a darker background....!!!
Well done...!!!

Nice shot.

Nice portrait.

Ah, thats amazing! The detail is excellent

lovely lovely...the make up is calm and elegant..the smile is wow
and the photographer is a wow too

I like this one a lot.... really nice, a bit softer makeup up... the dots next to her eye is distracting a bit.... But the photo is just great and I like the crop and background!